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Chuck vs. the Ring of Fire, Chapter 12: "God's Gonna Cut You Down"

3:00 P.M., Pacific Daylight Time

Sunday, August 26th, 2012

Bob Hope International Airport

Burbank, California

Southern California was about to go to war – and less than forty people knew about it. Three of them were headed to Mexico with three kids, and two of them were sitting in a Black Hawk helicopter, waiting for the signal to deploy.

The other thirty-two people were in a rather sizable convoy about to depart from Bob Hope Airport. The gate out onto Hollywood Way was opened, and the lead LAPD cruiser pulled out, code three, lights and sirens on. A black Hummer H1 followed it.

Chuck Bartowski was at the wheel of that Hummer, with John Casey riding shotgun, wielding an M4 carbine. Another LAPD cruiser followed that Hummer, then another Hummer, with Rachel Harrison at the wheel and Bryce Larkin riding shotgun. There was another LAPD cruiser, then Mitch Tucker’s Land Cruiser, with Morgan at the wheel and Carina riding shotgun. That was followed by yet another LAPD cruiser, a SWAT truck with a six-man team, another cruiser, an M3 Bradley armored personnel carrier with an eight-man police special ops team, and a sixth cruiser.

The convoy quickly covered the block down Hollywood Way, and turned left onto Empire Avenue. Chuck could feel his stomach doing somersaults, and cursed the fact that the mile and a half down Empire Avenue took less than five minutes.

The lead cruiser pulled into Empire Plaza – and all hell broke loose. The six cruisers fanned out across the parking lot, speeding toward Hermosa Audio. When they reached it, they created a perimeter around the front of the building, leaving a ten foot wide space in the middle of the perimeter. Officers clad in riot gear popped out of their cars and crouched behind their doors, guns up and aimed.

“Here we go,” Chuck muttered to Casey, aiming the Hummer toward the gap in the cruisers and flooring the accelerator. The V10 engine roared, pushing the warfare-intended vehicle up to thirty miles an hour.

The Hummer shot between the cruisers. Chuck closed his eyes and braced himself – and the Hummer crashed through the front window of Hermosa Audio. He slammed on the brakes, and just as Casey had instructed him, grabbed a flash-bang grenade out of the cup holder, pulled the pin, and tossed it out the window. He closed his eyes and ducked, but was still surprised by the noise and the light.

Casey jumped out as the people inside the building staggered to their feet. Reflexively, several pulled out guns. That was their last mistake, as Carina Hansen and Bryce Larkin came running into the building. Between them and Casey, every person in the building holding a gun was dead within ten seconds.

Only one person was left standing. He was trembling in fear, his hands in the air. Chuck walked up to him slowly.

“Are you a Firestone Slayer?” he asked.

Eyes wide, the man nodded. He didn’t look any older than twenty.

“Where is el Anillo del Fuego?” Chuck asked.

No sé,” the man replied, the fear evident on his face.

Chuck reached under his jacket and withdrew the Ruger revolver. He raised it and jammed the barrel against the man’s forehead. “Are you sure about that?”

“Yes! Yes! I don’t know where he is!” the man cried out. “I’m nobody important!”

Chuck looked into his eyes. This guy was clearly not important, otherwise he would’ve flashed on him. His eyes told Chuck that he was telling the truth. He lowered the gun, and the man sighed in relief.

“Is your car here?” Chuck asked him quietly.

“Yes,” the man replied, nodding his head like a bobble-head. He pointed outside, at a Honda Civic.

“You’re out of California tonight,” Chuck said. “Otherwise, you join these other men. Do I make myself clear?”

Eyes wide, the man nodded again. “Get out,” Chuck growled.

The man ran outside, jumped in the Civic, and tore out of the parking lot as quickly as he could.

Chuck and Casey got back into the Hummer and pulled back out of Hermosa Audio. Two police cruisers were left to secure the scene.

“Why didn’t you kill him, Bartowski?” Casey asked him as the convoy reformed and pulled out of the parking lot.

Chuck turned his face toward Casey. “He’s a drone, Casey, a foot soldier. He didn’t make the decision to threaten my family. He just got caught up in something he probably didn’t understand, and he willingly surrendered.”

Casey shook his head. “You know, Chuck, they don’t play by the rules… why do you?”

Chuck cocked his head to one side. “Casey, I play by the rules because I want to be able to look at myself in the mirror. When my kids grow up, I don’t want to tell them that their father’s a murderer.”

“What are you going to tell them about their mother?”

Chuck shook his head. “Don’t, Casey. The people she killed, she killed because they were very bad people.”

Casey’s face took on an expression of surprise. “She never told you, did she?”

“Told me what, Casey?”

Casey’s face took on a grim set. “Christmas Eve, 2005. She was in Brazil, on a mission. I was there, as were Carina and Bryce. The mission was to take down the da Silva government.

“Part of the mission was to destroy a pair of Tupolev model 160 ‘Blackjack’ bombers that Russia had sold to Brazil. I had gotten intelligence regarding the bombers that would allow us to destroy them with a minimal loss of life and a maximum amount of damage to the government’s reputation.

“Unfortunately, my intelligence was faulty. When the bombers were destroyed, they were loaded with Exocet cruise missiles. The missiles exploded, and took the fuel farm of the air base they were on with it. Approximately ten thousand people were killed.”

Casey paused, a pained look on his face. “I abandoned the mission and blindly fled Brazil. I ended up in the mental ward at DeKalb Medical Center in Atlanta. As for Sarah, she still, to this day, blames herself for the deaths of all those innocent people.”

Chuck didn’t say anything, just looked ahead at the pavement of southbound I-5. Finally, he asked, “Was it really her fault?”

Casey shook his head. “No. If it was anybody’s fault, it was mine. However, she felt, as the mission commander, that it was her responsibility.”

Chuck put his left hand to his forehead. “God,” he sighed. “Why didn’t she ever tell me? She shouldn’t have to carry that alone.”

“I am willing to almost guarantee you that she never told you because she was afraid you’d hate her for it,” Casey replied. “She has been very careful about everything she’s said and done around you almost since day one. With the exception of her little breakdown after Larkin resurfaced back in 2007, she has gone out of her way to not do anything that would make you think less of her.”

Chuck nodded, then took his left hand off his forehead, and pressed the button on the Bluetooth headset in his left ear. “Call Sarah,” he instructed it.

Casey’s eyes widened in alarm. “What the hell are you doing?”

“Calling my wife,” Chuck replied. “I want to tell her that I love her.”


San Clemente, California

The Suburban rolled through San Clemente, still flanked on all four sides by LAPD cruisers with their lights on. There had been minimal slowing, with the police cars clearing the way all the way down I-5.

The theme from Torchwood began to sound through the car. Sarah rolled her eyes. Chuck had programmed it into her phone as a joke after he became the leader of this “super-secret spy organization”. He had then proceeded to compare himself to Captain Jack Harkness, to which Sarah replied that if she ever caught him naked with Bryce, she would file for divorce.

She reached up and hit the button on the side of the Bluetooth on her ear. “Hello?”

“I love you,” Chuck’s voice sounded in her ear.

She smiled. “Well, I love you too,” she replied. “What prompts this, in the face of such danger?”

She heard Chuck sigh. “Casey just told me a little story,” Chuck said. “A story about, uh, Brazil.”

Sarah’s eyes widened and her stomach tied itself in a knot. “What about Brazil?”

“Santa Anita Air Base.”

Sarah gritted her teeth and blew her breath out slowly, drawing a strange look from Ellie, riding in the shotgun seat. “God dammit,” she whispered.

“Sarah, I don’t care,” Chuck said. “You were just doing your job. You had no way of knowing that those bombers were loaded.”

She had stopped listening after he said that he didn’t care. “You don’t care?” she asked, almost not believing it. “You don’t care that I was responsible for…”

Her voice trailed off. Despite all that Ellie and Devin knew, the Brazil mission was still heavily classified, and Sarah couldn’t risk them knowing about it. Fortunately, Chuck finished the sentence for her.

“…for the deaths of ten thousand people?” he said. “No. You know me better than that. You know that I have never, ever judged you based on what you’ve done – just on who you are. And it’s because of who you are that I love you. You know that.”

Sarah began to tear up a little. “Wow,” she whispered.

She could almost hear Chuck smile in response. “Hey, I knew that I was asking the female version of James Bond to marry me when I got down on my knee on Santa Monica Beach.”

Sarah smiled in spite of herself. “And I knew that I was saying yes to a slightly less nerdy version of Bill Gates.” That drew a giggle from Ellie.

Chuck gasped, in mock horror. “Bill Gates? Excuse me? Try Steve Jobs!” he exclaimed.

That made Sarah’s smile get even bigger. “Well, either way, I love you. I really love you. I love you more than I can say.”

“I love you more than that,” Chuck replied, and Sarah could hear Casey groan in the background.

“Better stop,” she said, “before you make Casey throw up.”

“Yeah,” Chuck replied. “I’d hate for the Hummer to smell like vomit.”

He paused for a moment. “Tell John and Lisa that Daddy says hi, and call me when you get to Ensenada, okay?”

“Okay,” Sarah said. “I love you.”

“I love you too.”


Glendale, California

The convoy was now headed east on the 134 freeway, headed toward the Inland Empire. “I love you more than that?” Casey asked mockingly. “Good Lord, what is this, junior high?”

“Oh, shut up,” Chuck replied. “What about you and Maya? You never talk about her, and Ellie says she never talks about you.”

“There’s a reason for that,” Casey shot back. “We don’t WANT you guys to know anything! I swear, when Sarah and your sister get together, they’re worse than high school cheerleaders!”

“Okay, that’s fair,” Chuck replied. “But is everything okay?”

Casey smiled slightly. “Have you noticed me stressed lately?”

Chuck thought about it. No, he really hadn’t. Then he thought about it a little more, and groaned. “As innocuous as that statement was, it really tells me more than I wanted to know,” he said disgustedly.


5:30 PM

Redlands, California

All was quiet at the house on La Paloma Street. Ten men were inside. Some were eating, some watching television, some cleaning their weapons. None were really that tense or alert. They weren’t expecting anything, and they all knew that El Anillo had threatened the man responsible for the incident a month and a half earlier, and so figured that he would back off as well.

And so none of them were expecting the door to be blown off its hinges at 5:32 PM. Nor were they expecting two men and a woman to burst in with guns blazing. And by 5:34 PM, none of them were expecting anything.

All save for one.

This one was a real diehard. He had been born into an MS 13 family, but when he was a teenager, he heard Maximillian Calijo give a speech at L.A. City College. The man had gotten him hooked – he was very much like Barack Obama in his mannerisms and the ability with which he could people at ease.

Afterwards, he had approached Calijo to ask what he could do. Calijo had introduced him to his brother, Alberto. Within a month, the boy had become a full-fledged member of the Firestone Boulevard Slayers. He had left home and moved to Norwalk. The first job he had been given was to kill a member of Mara Salvatrucha.

He had killed half a dozen all at once.

Now he was in the basement of the house in Redlands. It was full of weapons, explosives, and hard drives that detailed every last thing about the Firestone Slayers. He heard the gunshots above, heard the shouts. He knew that everything had to go.

He knelt, and grasped the crucifix around his neck. “Padre nuestro que estás en los cielos,” he prayed. “Santificado sea tu Nombre. Venga tu reino, hágase tu voluntad, en la tierra como en el cielo. Danos hoy el pan de este día…


Casey, Bryce, and Carina came back out of the house. “It’s secure!” Casey shouted. The LAPD S.W.A.T. team went running in. The three agents strolled across La Paloma Street to the vehicles.

“Quick and easy, Chuck,” Casey told him. “That just leaves the bar in Norwalk.”

“And that’s their stronghold,” Chuck reminded him. “It’s gonna be a bitch.”


Perdona nuestras deudas, como nosotros perdonamos nuestros deudores. No nos dejes caer en la tentación, sino que líbranos del malo.

With trembling hands, the young man picked up a grenade. Holding it in his hand, he pulled the pin.

Porque Tuyo es el Reino, el Poder y la Gloria por siempre, Señor. Amén.


Casey had just finished buckling himself in when the house exploded.

The fireball blew upwards, blasting through the roof, before the walls collapsed inward. The shock wave rocked the Hummer, but the pseudo-military vehicle stayed put.

The two LAPD cruisers parked in front of the house were not so lucky. They were flipped over like Hot Wheels. Fortunately, the officers who had driven them had been standing on the other side of the street, and had taken cover behind the S.W.A.T. truck when the house blew.

Chuck stared out the window in disbelief. “Oh my God... the S.W.A.T. team was in there,” he whispered.

“What have we done?”

Chuck vs. the Ring of Fire, Chapter 11: "Busted"

10:00 A.M., Pacific Daylight Time

Sunday, August 26th, 2012

Studio City, California

Things were not good. Things were very much not good.

Well, some things were very much not good. Other things were great.

As far as Nerd Cave Video Games, LLC, was concerned, things were freakin’ fantastic. They had just sold their fifth video game, and had acquired the rights to the old Sim City franchise from Maxis. Section Eight and Warner Brothers were going ahead with filming on the Mindnode pilot, and after meeting with the cast, Chuck had grudgingly okay’d Anton Yelchin and Miley Cyrus.

As far as Studio City Consulting Services, Inc., was concerned, however, things sucked a big one. Absolutely no headway had been made on the Firestone Slayers case. Chuck, Morgan, Casey, and Sarah were still stuck in their undercover positions at Empire Plaza during the week. Bryce and Carina were both on the shit list after their little stunts in July. Staff morale was terrible, although Casey’s spirits seemed to be revived every day after he visited the shooting range.

Things were pretty good at home. Chuck and Sarah’s relationship hadn’t suffered too terribly from the incidents with Bryce and Carina. If anything, it had grown stronger after dealing with those little challenges.

Chuck had wanted to educate the kids entirely through Intersect encoding – his justification was that it would make their life easier and that they’d be little geniuses. Sarah had said absolutely not. She wanted John and Lisa to have a traditional education – her justification being that since both she and Chuck were freakin’ geniuses anyway, they should have no problem.

However, after Chuck did a thorough study of the Los Angeles Unified School District’s curriculum, Sarah agreed to let him encode certain things – but not everything. And so, now, every time the kids watched an episode of Sesame Street on DVD, they were also learning AP Calculus, physics, French, and eschatology. Chuck didn’t expect them to ever have any practical use for the last one, but he thought that theological studies of the end times might be fun.

What pleased Chuck the most, though, was that Sarah was starting to give some serious thought to adoption. She hadn’t said anything about it to him yet, and he knew that it was probably still a pretty sensitive topic for her. However, he had left a booklet on the kitchen counter one afternoon – totally inadvertently – and when he next saw it, it was in her nightstand, with several pages dog-eared.

But the good things were the furthest from Chuck’s mind right at the moment that they could possibly be. Rick Pope and Sam Tyler were both looking for updates on the mission and wanting to know why the hell nothing had happened yet.

What was Chuck supposed to tell them? “I’m sorry, gentlemen, we’re completely incompetent and can’t deal with a street gang; in addition, one of my agents tried to blow me on a stakeout, and then I beat the hell out of another agent after he made a pass at my wife”? He had the distinct feeling that that would not go over well.

That’s when Chuck’s phone rang. He sighed. This wouldn’t be good. It would be one of those two, calling for their update.

But it wasn’t. Chuck did a double-take when he looked at the phone and saw Sarah’s picture – the picture he’d snapped of her so long before, when he’d known her for just a couple of weeks.

Confused, he pushed the call button. “Hey,” he said. “What’s going on?”

There was a tremor in Sarah’s voice that he had never heard before. “You need to come home, right now,” she told him, not leaving it open for discussion.

“Uh, okay,” he replied. He knew better than to argue.

And he certainly wasn’t going to walk home, either – like he had walked to work that morning. He ran downstairs to the garage and got in, as Morgan called it, the Hoffmobile – his 1982 Trans Am. The Chevy 350 small block engine roared as Chuck brought the car to life. He sped out of the garage onto Vantage, took a hard left, and almost immediately a right out onto Ventura Boulevard.

Two minutes later, he roared into the driveway of his house. He didn’t even bother with the garage – the Magnum and Sarah’s old 911 – both finally repaired – were in there. He ran up to the front door, and with a trembling hand, unlocked it.

Sarah was sitting, indian style, in front of the coffee table in the living room. Her face was pale, and a letter was in front of her, along with a picture and something that looked suspiciously like a lock of hair.

“What’s going on?” Chuck asked.

Sarah didn’t say anything, just handed him the note, the picture, and the hair.

Mr. Bartowski – I compliment you on your ability to wreak havoc among my men. How unfortunate for you that I have the ability to do the same upon your family. – El Anillo del Fuego

Chuck looked at the photograph. It was a picture of Lisa and John on a playground, with Sarah next to them. The playground was at North Hollywood Park, at Tujunga and Chandler. The picture had clearly been taken through the scope from a sniper rifle.

Chuck’s hands started to shake as he set the picture and the note down. He looked at the lock of blonde hair in his hand. There was no question – it was Lisa’s. There was even a barrette attached to it that he and Sarah had just assumed she had lost.

“Where are they?” Chuck said quietly.

“They’re in the bedroom, asleep,” Sarah replied. “This was just delivered by messenger, five minutes ago.”

“Get them in the station wagon,” Chuck nearly whispered.

Sarah nodded, and silently headed toward the twins’ bedroom. Chuck pulled out his phone and dialed a number.

“Yo, Chuck!” came the voice of Morgan.

“Morgan,” Chuck said, the tone in his voice instantly causing a change in Morgan’s demeanor.

“Buddy… what’s going on?”

“I need you to call everybody, get them to the building. Right now. Tell Ellie and Devin to make sure they bring Katie with them.”

“I’m on it.”

And the line disconnected. Chuck went to the garage, his world seemingly in a haze. When he got there, he found John already buckled into his carseat, and Sarah putting Lisa in hers.

Neither Sarah nor Chuck said a word as they got into the front seat of the Magnum – Sarah driving, Chuck riding shotgun. As he buckled himself in, he pulled his Ruger from under his jacket. Sarah drew her Colt and set it on the dashboard.

The drive back to the SCCS building was silent save for the sounds of the car and the occasional sigh from one of the two sleeping toddlers. When they reached the building, Sarah pulled the car directly into the garage, the door rolling shut behind the car.

Every other car was already there. Chuck smiled grimly at the thought of how efficient the team was. He and Sarah stood to either side of the elevator doors as they waited for it to arrive. When the doors opened, they both turned into it, guns aimed toward the back wall. Nobody. With each a toddler in tow, they boarded the elevator. Sarah pressed the button for the second floor.

The clearing drill was repeated on the second floor, the two Bartowskis ensuring that nobody was going to shoot them down when they exited the elevator. Scooping up the kids, they quickly crossed the floor to the conference room.

They were all there. Casey, Bryce, Carina. Morgan, Ellie, Devin, Katie. Rachel, Will, Mitch. They all looked very concerned.

Chuck and Sarah strode to the head of the table, Sarah taking her seat and holding the two kids on her lap. “These were delivered to our house about twenty minutes ago,” Chuck said without preamble, handing the note, the picture, and the lock of hair to Casey.

Casey took in the three items wordlessly. His facial expression didn’t change, but Chuck could see the fire of murder and hatred erupt behind his eyes. He slowly handed the items to Bryce, who had a similar reaction.

Nobody spoke as the items were passed around the table. Ellie gasped when she saw the picture, but didn’t speak. When the items returned to the head of the table, Bryce finally spoke.

“What are we going to do?”

Chuck sighed. “Sarah, Ellie, and Devin are going to take the three kids and Casey’s Suburban and go to Casey’s safe house in Ensenada,” he said.

“What?!” Sarah protested. “You can’t –“

Chuck held up his hand, and she stopped. He turned and looked at her. “Please,” he said quietly. “I need you to take care of our children. I need to know they’re safe, and there’s nobody I trust more to keep them safe than you.”

Sarah looked down at the table. As much as she wanted to, she couldn’t argue with Chuck’s logic.

“What about the rest of us?” Casey asked, a knife edge in his voice.

Chuck looked Casey directly in the eyes.

“Kill them,” he said softly. “Kill them all.”


2:15 P.M.

Bob Hope International Airport

Burbank, California

Mitch Tucker walked slowly around the UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter, checking everything. The stub wings were firmly attached, and they were as heavily loaded as they could get. A .50 caliber minigun on one wing, a pod of six Hellfire missiles on the other. It would do some serious damage.

The Black Hawk was going to be held in reserve for the moment. The first target was Hermosa Audio, just down the road. Then would be the armory house in Redlands, and finally the headquarters – a bar just east of Pioneer on Firestone. That’s when the helicopter would come into play.

Mitch would be flying the weapons position on the Black Hawk, with Will Williamson piloting. As Will began his own walk-around on the helicopter, Mitch began pulling pins from the Hellfire missiles.

Two Hummer H1s that had been purchased for this very purpose and parked in the hangar with the Black Hawk were being prepped for battle as well. Casey and Bryce were making sure that they were in tip-top fighting condition.

Sarah, Devin, Ellie, and the three kids had come to see them off. Sarah had spent nearly half an hour trying to convince Chuck that her place was here, but she had finally agreed to take the kids to safety.

The sound of sirens pierced the Burbank afternoon. All heads looked toward the gate on Hollywood Way as a stream of LAPD cars poured onto the airport grounds, accompanied by a SWAT truck and what looked distinctly like an armored personnel carrier.

The LAPD vehicles roared up to the SCCS hangar, and parked in a defensive perimeter around the opening. “Lovely,” Casey breathed.

But the officers didn’t jump out, guns in hand. Rather, the door of one car opened, and Commander Rick Pope stepped out.

“You look like you’re about to go to war, Mr. Bartowski!” he called as he approached the hangar.

Chuck had a guarded look in his eyes. “Something like that,” he replied cautiously.

Pope smiled. “Will a certain gang be coming out of this bruised and beaten, if they come out of it all?”

“That Suburban is headed to Ensenada,” Chuck replied, avoiding the question. “It’s taking my wife, my sister, my brother-in-law, my two kids, and my niece to safety. I’m not telling you anything else until that Suburban leaves.”

Pope nodded, turned his back on Chuck, and walked to another cruiser. He knocked on the window, and it rolled down. Chuck couldn’t hear what he was saying, but a moment later, four cruisers moved out of the perimeter and took up escort positions around the Suburban.

Commander Pope walked back over to Chuck. “Those cruisers will escort the Suburban all the way to Ensenada,” he said. “They may or may not be replaced by Polícia Federal at the border, but either way, the Suburban will have an escort all the way to Ensenada.”

Chuck looked at Pope with disbelief, and then jogged over to the window of the Suburban. It rolled down, and Sarah looked out at him.

“You’re gonna have a police escort all the way down,” he told her. “I’m not sure what’s going on, but it looks like they’re going out of their way to keep you safe.”

She nodded, and smiled sadly. “Please be safe, Chuck,” she said. “Don’t do anything stupid. I want to have a husband to come home to.”

Chuck smiled. “You will, I promise,” he replied, trying not to choke up. He leaned in to kiss Sarah good-bye, but she reached out, and practically pulled him into the Suburban. It was almost as if it was becoming a tradition – the Chuck and Sarah doomsday kiss, just like the one on the San Pedro docks, just like the one in the CIA facility in Moab, just like the one in their garage when the NSA strike team was about to kill them.

When she released him, he opened his eyes – and saw that hers were filled with tears. “I love you,” she whispered.

“I love you too, Sarah,” he said back. Then he stepped back, and she put the Suburban into gear. The four cruisers all turned their lights on, and the SUV and its police escort pulled away.

Chuck stood watching until the five vehicles had pulled off the Burbank Airport property. When he turned, he discovered Commander Pope and Casey standing right behind him.

“You ready to take care of the Firestone Slayers?” Pope asked.

Chuck smiled grimly and nodded.

“Alright,” Pope replied. “Let’s go do this thing.”